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November 16, 2013 at 1:41 pm #20215
Neil753
http://www.bbc.co.uk/news/uk-england-london-24937699
The poor cyclist is described as in a “crash with a bus”, the headline describes cyclists, in the opinion of bus drivers, as “unbelievable”, and the accompanying media just takes the one sided reporting up a notch. The reporter makes no attempt to balance the report by interviewing any cyclists. Do people think this is all a little biased, or is my judgement clouded because I happen to be a cyclist? I’m tempted to complain about this, but I’ll go by what readers think.
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kie7077
Gman59c wrote:Equating the
Gman59c wrote:Equating the way cyclists are treated in the media to racism is really poor taste.Prejudice is prejudice, it is judging a person based on their race, sex religion, disability, age, sexual type, etc.
All prejudices are wrong, I don’t think you understood the purpose of my post and I don’t see why it is in poor taste at all. Britain has a serious anti-cycling prejudices, this silly idea that cycling is for children or cyclists should only be mountain biking off-road, or all cyclists are law-breakers.
If you think my post is in bad taste then you need to explain why. The prejudices I have met on the road have been life-threatening at times, the behavior of some anti-cyclist drivers is scary, they have 2-ton weapons and when they are careless with them, they just get a slap on the wrist, if anything.
William Black
GoingRoundInCycles wrote:
GoingRoundInCycles wrote:‘collides with’ does not mean ‘crashes into'No, but it implies it does.
jmaccelari
It’s an opinion piece, so I
It’s an opinion piece, so I reckon it’s fair enough. And from what I have observed on the roads, I can understand their point of view. There are some real kamikazis out there on bikes who are quite prepared to take on a bus.GoingRoundInCycles
Luminosity wrote:I guess if
Luminosity wrote:I guess if you think it’s neutral there’s no inference there. To me there is – even if it’s just a hint.If you consider, for example, over these last few weeks that the headlines had been:
“tipper truck collides with cyclist”
“London bus collides with cyclist”
“HGV collides with cyclist”rather than (for example)
“cyclist collides with tipper truck”
“cyclist collides with London bus”
“cyclist collides with HGV”to me, at least, the inference is clear.
They are all interchangeable because ‘collides with’ does not mean ‘crashes into’. Those six headlines mean two vehicles in motion tried to occupy the same space.
In any case, none of those incidents are newsworthy IMO. What is very much newsworthy, IMO, is a serious injury or fatality occuring due to a collision.
So which is better?
Cyclist seriously injured in collision with tipper truck
or
Tipper truck collides with cyclist who is now seriously injured
The second is unsatisfactory IMO but maybe you can come up with a better version.
Luminosity
AFAIK
“a bicycle collided
AFAIK“a bicycle collided with a bus” is less neutral than “there was a collision involving a bus and bicycle”.
Granted, the former is a more engaging way of writing the copy and more interesting for the reader. It is also one commonly used.
I think we can argue semantics all day and not come to any conclusion or meeting of minds and that certainly seems to be the case here.
The “collided with” quote was from the BBC and it was one we were attempting to find a better use of language to describe so that, perhaps, ultimately we can suggest to the BBC and others (when their report p*ss us off) that they might attempt to alter the editorial to find a better way of expressing the incident without inference, through what might be lazy or populist journalism, that it was the cyclist who was the cause of the event. I guess if you think it’s neutral there’s no inference there. To me there is – even if it’s just a hint.
If you consider, for example, over these last few weeks that the headlines had been:
“tipper truck collides with cyclist”
“London bus collides with cyclist”
“HGV collides with cyclist”rather than (for example)
“cyclist collides with tipper truck”
“cyclist collides with London bus”
“cyclist collides with HGV”to me, at least, the inference is clear.
felixcat
GoingRoundInCycles
GoingRoundInCycles wrote:
Because the wall is stationary it becomes apparent that ‘collision with’, is not appropriate at all in the sentence “wall collides with cyclist” as in the non-Physics sense, walls do not move. Most people would write that as “cyclist crashes into wall”.But “bicycle in collision with car” and “car in collision with bicycle” mean exactly the same thing, if both were moving at the time of the collision. They came together ….. Not in that sense, obviously.
“In collision with” and collides with” are not grammatically the same. I’m not going to labour this any more, but surely, if ” the car collided with the bike” meant exactly the same as ” the bike collided with the car” then “the bike collided with the wall” could be replaced with ” the wall collided with the bike” without any problem.
I was quibbling about “collides with” not “in collision with”.GoingRoundInCycles
felixcat
felixcat wrote:GoingRoundInCycles wrote:Both the Earth and an asteroid are in motion. A wall isn’t ….. well relative to the cyclist although it is attached to a planet travelling at very high speed. … as is the cyclist ….my head hurts. :B
It is because the wall is stationary that it becomes apparent that the word order does make a difference. If the positioning of the words in the sentence made no difference to its meaning it would be possible to reverse the sentence and still make sense, since the meaning would be the same whichever way round.
Because the wall is stationary it becomes apparent that ‘collision with’, is not appropriate at all in the sentence “wall collides with cyclist” as in the non-Physics sense, walls do not move. Most people would write that as “cyclist crashes into wall”.
But “bicycle in collision with car” and “car in collision with bicycle” mean exactly the same thing, if both were moving at the time of the collision. They came together ….. Not in that sense, obviously.
Words. :S
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or put more intelligently, wot Dave just said ^^^
dave atkinson
wall and cyclist is a
wall and cyclist is a different use case. one is static and one is dynamic. a bus and a cyclist are both dynamic; a collision between them simply describes them coming together, it doesn’t apportion cause or blame.felixcat
GoingRoundInCycles wrote:Both
GoingRoundInCycles wrote:Both the Earth and an asteroid are in motion. A wall isn’t ….. well relative to the cyclist although it is attached to a planet travelling at very high speed. … as is the cyclist ….my head hurts. :B
It is because the wall is stationary that it becomes apparent that the word order does make a difference. If the positioning of the words in the sentence made no difference to its meaning it would be possible to reverse the sentence and still make sense, since the meaning would be the same whichever way round.
Colin Peyresourde
GoingRoundInCycles wrote:
InGoingRoundInCycles wrote:In both cases those people would be wrong. Collide simply means to come together which is why “collide with” makes sense and “collide into” does not.
“The Earth collides with an asteroid” and “an asteroid collides with the Earth” mean exactly the same thing. The only difference is which object you consider to be the most important when you structure your sentence.
A headline like,
Cyclist seriously injured in collision with bus
Is correct, IMO, as the injury to the cyclist is more important than the existence of a collision.
Bus in collision with seriously injured cyclist
Is misleading. Was the cyclist seriously injured before the collision?
Bus in collision with cyclist who suffers serious injuries
Is unwieldy and makes the collision the subject of the sentence with the serious injuries as just additional information, which is inappropriate IMO.
Accident? How do we know that it was an accident until the collision has been thoroughly investigated? Maybe it was no accident, a jealous partner paid someone to run the unfortunate cyclist down on the way home from work?
We know for sure that a collision has taken place. IMO it is the most appropriate word to use in these circumstances, but never ‘collide into’.
“Crash into” is only appropriate when a moving object hits a stationary one.
Blimey, it’s the grammatical equivalent of a tongue twister. But I agree. I think…..
GoingRoundInCycles
Both the Earth and an
Both the Earth and an asteroid are in motion. A wall isn’t ….. well relative to the cyclist although it is attached to a planet travelling at very high speed. … as is the cyclist ….my head hurts. :B
felixcat
GoingRoundInCycles
GoingRoundInCycles wrote:
“The Earth collides with an asteroid” and “an asteroid collides with the Earth” mean exactly the same thing. The only difference is which object you consider to be the most important when you structure your sentence.It seems to me there is a difference.
Consider, “the cyclist collided with the wall.”
and “the wall collided with the cyclist.”GoingRoundInCycles
Luminosity
Luminosity wrote:Simon_MacMichael wrote:
Saying that a cyclist, car, whatever, was “in a collision” with another vehicle isn’t “factually inaccurate” – it’s neutralSorry to disagree but it’s not – and it all comes down to semantics.
“a bus today was in a collision with a bicycle”
“a cyclist today was in a collision with a bus”
In the first instance what people will generally glean is that is was the BUS that did the colliding; in the second that it was the CYCLIST.
“an accident involving” is neutral.
In both cases those people would be wrong. Collide simply means to come together which is why “collide with” makes sense and “collide into” does not.
“The Earth collides with an asteroid” and “an asteroid collides with the Earth” mean exactly the same thing. The only difference is which object you consider to be the most important when you structure your sentence.
A headline like,
Cyclist seriously injured in collision with bus
Is correct, IMO, as the injury to the cyclist is more important than the existence of a collision.
Bus in collision with seriously injured cyclist
Is misleading. Was the cyclist seriously injured before the collision?
Bus in collision with cyclist who suffers serious injuries
Is unwieldy and makes the collision the subject of the sentence with the serious injuries as just additional information, which is inappropriate IMO.
Accident? How do we know that it was an accident until the collision has been thoroughly investigated? Maybe it was no accident, a jealous partner paid someone to run the unfortunate cyclist down on the way home from work?
We know for sure that a collision has taken place. IMO it is the most appropriate word to use in these circumstances, but never ‘collide into’.
“Crash into” is only appropriate when a moving object hits a stationary one.
dave atkinson
Luminosity wrote:I think the
Luminosity wrote:I think the whole point here was to discuss such use of language as:“cyclist died after colliding with lorry”
that’s kind of simon’s point, and also mine. we use ‘in a collision with’ because it’s neutral. ‘collided with’, as you’ve written above, isn’t neutral.
‘in a collision with’ is currently the accepted phraseology in circumstances where the specifics aren’t known, because it doesn’t apportion blame to either party and nor does it rule out the possibility of blame, which accident does in a legal sense.
the only reason it’s the cyclist first, and not the lorry or bus, is because the cyclist is the normally the subject of the sentence, because they’ve been injured or killed.
Luminosity
I think the whole point here
I think the whole point here was to discuss such use of language as:“cyclist died after colliding with lorry”
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